"Krista: Living the New Adoption Law"
In the article "Krista: Living the New Adoption Law" by Krista Ramsey, we are introduced to someone named Hope Coffee. Hope was adopted when she was young, and up until now she hasn't been able to access any data about her birth mother, but with the new bill passed, she will be able to find this information and possibly contact her birth mother by March 2015. One quote from this article is,
"When [Coffee] began asking more questions as a teenager, her adoptive father told her the few facts he'd been told-her mother was 19 or 20, a college student, of Caucasian and Native American descent, and her father was African-American. It was enough. For a while."
This quote from the article shows that Coffee started to wonder what her birth mom was like, and what type of background that she came from. Coffee was happy with what she knew for a while, but from this quote, the sentence structure and wording of the end gives the reader the sense that she has become curious again, and wants to know more about her birth mother. The sentence length of the ending also gives the reader the idea that Coffee isn't done with the search, and plans to do more to find her mother. The diction of this line is pretty casual, making it easier for the reader to understand on a basic level. Overall, the syntax and writing styles of this quote demonstrate good use of sentence structure and quality writing.
One quote from "For better vision, kids need time outdoors" by Krista Ramsey is, "The kid who used to walk home from school looking at houses and trees now rides home staring at a screen not much bigger than his hand. The teenager who used to research at the library or hang out with friends outdoors now does her studying and socializing in front of a computer in her bedroom." One quote from "Super Bowl QBs score points for great style" by Krista Ramsey is, "It's a hopeful sign in a nation that now accepts flip-flops and jeans as appropriate wear for weddings, graduations, awards banquets and funerals. At work, 'Casual Fridays' have morphed into sundresses and golf shirts every day." These quotes also show Ramsey's writing style continues to have more casual diction, and varying sentence lengths and structures. One thing that stays consistent throughout her writings is to relate the article to the reader, and include lots of great detail to make the story understandable.
If I could ask Krista Ramsey some questions, I would ask how do you come up with different types of writing styles to make the writing interesting and keep the reader's attention, where do you come up with ideas for writing these articles, and how do you develop a tone while writing an article about a certain topic, event, or person.